Wednesday, August 26, 2009

UPDATE: Salt water Haiku...

The topic for this week's Haiku Challenge is:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OCEAN ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

UPDATE: VOTE VOTE VOTE before 11 pm, please.

Remember, Sparrow sends a Deluxe Care Package
in the winner's name to a member of our military
serving in harm's way.
~~~

How many critters
swim in the ocean and where
do all of them pee?
~
buoyed by the waves
meditation therapy
for soul and body.
~
condense something so
enormous down to a mere
three-line haiku? tears.

4 comments:

curmudgeon said...

To answer the question:

They all have to piss
Either in the oceans or...
Your water supply.

Ugh.

Jean said...

Not to mention all the people swimming...ew.

kdzu said...

"How many critters
swim in the ocean and where
do all of them pee?"

Now that'll make ya think the next time you plan a trip to the beach, won't it?

Jean said...

Larry, heh. I tell myself that it is so huge it must be greatly diluted.
;-)