Monday, June 08, 2009

Picture perfect...

looking for a
picture that matches
the one in my mind
of you and me
on the beach in the rain
slow dancing to our own
music. the rhythm only
you and I have together.

sipping raindrops from your lips.
you wrapping my hair
around your fingertips.

barefoot in the foam
at the edge of low tide
toes sinking in the soft sand
moonlight sparkling off the
ocean. and us.

And us. sparkling and
swaying and tasting the
rain. on each other.

Perfect picture complete.


the walking man said...

If I had an unbroken romantic bone left in my body I would like this.

Good rhythm wonderful flow from image to image and a fine end line.

Anonymous said...

OMG. . . . HOT. . . . I want to paint this picture with you. . .

Jean said...

Mark...praise from a master.
Thank you, sir. could be the brush ;-)

Joan of Argghh! said...

More, please!

Living Dees Life said...

makes me think of me and my man

Jean said...

Joanie, let me check my stash ;-)

Blaez, that is a very good thing!

Diane said...


Don't you wish you COULD have pictures of certain moments? Well, the ones where you're wearing clothes, of course! ;)

Or not... ;)


Sparrow said...

Oh my.

kdzu said...

Somebody so needs to get laid.

boneman said...

dancing, but, not into the water.


Jean said...

Diane, the 'or not' sounds good to me ;-)

Sparrow? Yo, Sparrow. You ok? heh.

Bwahahaha! Larry. Dammit, I am so obvious.

Berry, no, only on the shallow edge where it's safe. and fun.

Anonymous said...

I'd hit it, given the chance.


Jean said...

Would you now, BDP? You could probably handle it, too.

Dan Felstead said...

Great descriptive verse! I am a photographer and I am searching my mind now for a photo that matches but none can match your words.


Jean said...

Dan, I much admire your photography and take your comment as a wonderful compliment. Thank you :-)