Tuesday, September 05, 2006

hide.....

slip quietly through the day
sit back among the vines
find a corner in the dark
make a pillow of the leaves
disturb no other's path
let shadow comfort thee

16 comments:

Freddie said...

Ah. Sounds like just the kind of day I need.

I see you got your roll up Jean. Thanks for the link.

Anonymous said...

.. I like this one a lot...

Eric

Jean said...

Freddie - you are very welcome.
It does sound peaceful there, doesn't it?

Eric - thanks...praise from a master!

Anonymous said...

Nice ... very nice.

Jean said...

Jim - thank you...another opinion I value highly.

kdzu said...

Are those Kudzu vines?
Oh how sweet it smells when they are in bloom. And if by chance they grow near a small brooklet with water rippling over the stones, then it is bliss sublime to lean back against a tree under the vines to doze for a while. Perchance to dream of happier times.

k said...

oh, nice, nice.

Jean said...

k.d.zu - truthfully, I was thinking of your kudzu when I wrote this. Have never smelled the blooms, but I hope to some day.
And, dear sir...hope you can post something soon...did the move go smoothly?

Hello there, K!...glad you like.

Neoma said...

ah.........I actually think in this light Kudze has a place....a retreat. I like this Jean, it is soothing.

Neoma said...

Jean, I linked you so that I can always find my way back.

Jean said...

Nea - a place to breathe and think, dontcha think?

...and take a look at my side bar...The Southern View is there...
thank you for linking me also.

boneman said...

Dunno 'bout the kudzu,

This here sounds like me.

Jean said...

boneman - artists, especially, like their dark quiet corners.

Anonymous said...

I liked it..."let shadow comfort thee"

Jean said...

john c - wrapped around by the quiet dark can feel good...thanks.

Neoma said...

HI Jean, I see it.... :):) Thank you.......