Monday, April 07, 2008

You can't get here from there...

I will not
love you
this time.
Go away.
Stay away.
Come again
no other day.

19 comments:

Anonymous said...

That was poignant Jean...

Dianne

Anonymous said...

Dont know why but I am having problems with my blogger comment posting again...???

Dianne

AspergantuS said...

This sounds familiar....

Anonymous said...

I've never once looked back.

Carteach said...

Yup.
Some folks.....


You are good with words, Jean.

boneman said...

That rarely works, y'know....

Oh well, stand your ground, girl.

kdzu said...

And if they still refuse to leave...
....threaten to do a Kirby Vacuum demo for them.
Or do like I and politely ask them to wait while I get my gun.......then reach into my pocket.

Anonymous said...

All my thoughts
Are of a distant friend.
Someone I don't know
Of a person.

She is as strong
As her words are vibrant.
I will hope she always stays
Near my beating heart.

In this place where poets reside.

In this place. Always.

Anonymous said...

Am I any good at this lady-doll?

Jean said...

Yes, Mark. Very, very good.
I hope you save these.

Anonymous said...

:)

i guess
this told them!

/t.

Mark said...

Sorry to be a PITA but your words put me in a mood.

Usually a good one :-)

AspergantuS said...

Jean... never say "Come again" to a man, even if it's followed by a negative....

Anonymous said...

Jean.... that has to be the most powerful verse you've written. Mel xx

Anonymous said...

One word summary: finis

boneman said...

so....somewhere around mid-day yesterday (Thursday) I realized I had completely missed the haikus!

So, i went over, figured I'de vote for you...
guess what?
Wel, I guess you know, huh?

You missed them, too.

boneman said...

....maybe a walkout by the beach would help?

Jean said...

Funny you should mention that, Berry. Was just thinking my muse might appreciate a visit to the ocean some evening this weekend.
She sure hasn't had much to say lately, even as I've been struggling with a piece for a few weeks. Just haven't got it quite right yet.

Jean said...

p.s.

Mark, you are not a PITA.

Mel!! Good to see you again :-)