time out of mind was
or yet to be remembered
in one-thought pieces.
*
once upon a time
this time seemed neverending.
all time is not ours.
*
winding, winding down
flash-flash path of memory
exhale one last time.
*
love it this time more
than last time. there may not be
another time here.
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Karl is this week's Haiku Monday host.
Use the 5-7-5 format and join in.
Fun group of peeps.
or yet to be remembered
in one-thought pieces.
*
once upon a time
this time seemed neverending.
all time is not ours.
*
winding, winding down
flash-flash path of memory
exhale one last time.
*
love it this time more
than last time. there may not be
another time here.
*******************
Karl is this week's Haiku Monday host.
Use the 5-7-5 format and join in.
Fun group of peeps.
8 comments:
I understand your take is on time. I like the middle two more than the end two. Enjambment is not good for Haiku...just saying Jean.
Rain, rain still it falls
Look at the side yard it floods
at least it's not snow
My Muse decided she did not like "Time " as a topic.
I never did play well with others.
But it's MY haiku, Mark ;-).
(I had to look up 'enjambment'.)
Joe, you can play here anytime.
Hey! you're in this week. How nice. :-) Great job on both of them.
Thanks, Boxer. I love your Christmas with Coco Card!
Good morning Jean,
Thanks for playing this week. All of your haiku are most enjoyable. Particularly: Once upon a time.
Thank you, Karl. I love haiku.
Thank you for hosting.
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