My musings.........my thoughts.........my self
Hey! Two haikus I like!(Maybe two comments too. Google ate the first one with an error message. It may regurgitate it later.)
Ha!...I like 'em all, gonna leave as is d:-)
it's the distance factor, no doubt.And the Earth is spinning Easterly, so, there's a delay there.
Like the contrast in perspectives offered jean.
Fighting centrifugal force or gravity, perhaps?Thank you, Mark. Obviously, we can make words say anything we want.
I meant to comment on these as a fine example of the traditional haiku.All too often the natural beauty and the resolving last line are left in the pitch and yaw of amateurs.These are so lovely and would sit prettily on a cup, in a framed art, a mini-easel. . .
Your critique means a lot, Joan.Really. Thank you.I kinda liked 'em, too ;-)
I'd classify these two more as a home run rather than only a double. And no stolen bases. A solid hit to center and a trot around the diamond.
Ha!...what a great compliment, Larry.thank you :-)
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