The Haiku contest topic at All Atwitter is:
****************TRIALS******************
Please go back to vote for your favorite by 11 pm Thursday.
Girlfriend lemme tell
ya. Life, it just ain't never
fair. I broke a nail.
prick-eth not my heart
dastardly, bastardly swine.
aim prick-eth lower.
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"prick-eth not my heart
dastardly, bastardly swine.
aim prick-eth lower."
Ha! Love it.
I'm gonna try and get ya a couple more votes on this one. (Course, I can't guarantee much.)
I can't go into contests, but I can write here.
In the game of life,
pain is growth, knowledge, wisdom.
Your trials will make you.
I think I did that right. 5,7,5
Yours are all girly. :p
L.R. votes are always appreciated! But, I don't know which one will be picked for voting.
May I link you on my sidebar? ;-)
Doom...mine are all girly? Well, ya-ahhh. heh.
Yours is VERY good, except for 1 extra syllable in the last line.
(could be "Your trials make you.")
I like the second one!
Thought you might, girlfriend ;-)
roses ain't always red
sometimes they be purple
like maple surple
Well I'm gonna check it out then.
And, absolutely. Thank you. :)
GUYK, you have a new career in the making ;-) Thanks for visiting!
You're welcome, LR.
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