Thursday, December 06, 2007

Daydreaming...

sitting quiet,
someone paused
and asked, why
am I smiling so?
I answered, blushing,
it is this
man I know.
You take my
breath away,
he said to me,
I've never been
so weak.

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

Without explicitly being so, this is very passionately erotic...

And I am reminded of one of the few serious utterances by George Carlin -- something to the effect of: Life is not measured by the breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away.

Winston
http://nobodyasked.com

AspergantuS said...

pant, pant, pant....

Jean said...

Winston - considering the scenario that might have taken his breath away... yes, there could have been eros there.
I love George Carlin!

Mick - somebody get the oxygen!
heh...

kdzu said...

Dang girl, passionate thoughts early in the morning. Now I'll be thinking of it all day. Sweet!

Jean said...

Larry - hope it kept you smiling :)

LBJ said...

Lovely words that conjure up even more loving pictures.

boneman said...

I like how they affect each other.

Jean said...

Lin - human imagination is wonderful, eh?

Berry - me too.

Doom said...

How can one live without such thoughts? Doesn't the opposite sex just fill and complete one? Oh, but don't let me disturb your warm fuzzies... Bah, hormones, can't live with them, can't live without them... I'm gone!

Jean said...

Doom - like you, if I'm awake, I'm thinking. And, thinking often stirs the hormones :)

Corby said...

That one was dreamy, wish it would happen to me!

-Corby

Jean said...

Corby - a bittersweet memory from a while ago.

Michelle said...

I think that I love this.........

Jean said...

Michelle - why thank you...and, Welcome!