Monday, June 02, 2008

dit moi pourquoi...

a memory never was
but wished for.
dreams will never see
light of day.
tomorrow will be emptier
without one.
eventually,
everything goes away.

13 comments:

Jean said...

'tell me why'...

AspergantuS said...

very nice piece Jean, very nice. Has a great flow.

Jean said...

thanks, dear. We need to make some music!

Doom said...

That is almost depressing, but it isn't. It is so airy, with enough truth and simplicity too, that is is silken. Thanks.

Winston said...

I was groping for the right words. Then I saw doom's comment. Right...

Jean said...

Such gracious gentlemen, my readers.

Deadman said...

dit moi pourquoi...

Parceque, malheureusement, ca c'est la vie de temps en temps. Mais il fait plus doux les experiences entretemps.

;o)>

Faith said...

Doom said it best. where I am it speaks to my heart. Bless you Jean.

Joan of Argghh! said...

what doom said...

damn, woman! awesome.

Jean said...

Mark...I'm going back to my Fr/Eng dictionary. It's been a long time :-)

Bless you, Faith.

Joan...thanks, gal.

dianne said...

Beautiful Jean, but sad, as all things come to emptiness...

curmudgeon said...

Over the hill? What hill? I don't remember any hill...

Michelle said...

Very literal translation:

Says me why...

Because, unfortunately, ca this is time life in time. But it does more soft the experiences between time.

I don't see (feel) the happy in this one either... Welcome back!