Tuesday, September 04, 2007

Titillate...

a stream of
perspiration,
glinting in the sun,
slid down between
her breasts
and tickled her nipples
erect.

15 comments:

Scott from Oregon said...

oh!

kdzu said...

I'm sure that was a sight to behold.

Irrelephant said...

You write like a woman in love, and then you write like a man in love. VERY well done, Jean.

Jean said...

Scott - easy... :)

Larry - It was hot work, trimming that jasmine.

Irrelephant - Thank you, sir.

Jim - PRS said...

Love the title too. It's perfect on several levels.

Winston said...

I am blinded by the vision ...

Rick said...

Be right back, I gotta take a shower.

boneman said...

what....
no pictures?

So, was that when he ate one? What? Oh, I thought it was tit I ate. No, huh?
Dang!

The Atavist said...

Love your imagery. With you, less is always more.

Jean said...

Jim - thank you for noticing! :)

Winston - heh. I'll take that as a 'yes' vote. Thank you.

Rick - cold shower? ;)

Berry - no pics, sorry :)

Atavist - Thank you... I prefer simple whenever possible.

boneman said...

Y'know, after that smart-alecky comment I made, I went home, and (not having air conditioning) took off m'shirt and as a sweat bead slowly started down m'chest, I thought of yer short poem, and dang!

Thought of your breats all night long!

B.C. said...

"It was hot work, trimming that jasmine."

Any pics of that lovely, trimmed jasmine? ;-)

Awww, DAMN! I just saw your comment about there not being any pics.

*Ambles away sullenly...*

Jean said...

Berry - oh, my...

b.c. - heh.

AspergantuS said...

A moment I have
To ponder the visual
A moment I had

Haiku

Jean said...

Mick - wow. I think you have found yet another talent in you.