Saturday, March 30, 2013

Doom does Haiku... (update)

Wowwza!... Doom said my haiku WON.
I'll figure out something for the next contest and post it Friday.

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I haven't written haiku in a long time.
Doom heads up the contest for Monday
and has set interesting parameters.
Go here to read what he asks for.

His topic is: "The Beast Within"
my entry...


the beast
is self,
denied.

10 comments:

the walking man said...

Jean good job, like it!

foam said...

Excellent!

Doom said...

That is quite nice. And you have framed it well here. See, and you were all worried.

I after doing excess I was curious to see economy. I didn't think it would actually work, but it definitely does, in the right mind.

Jean said...

Thank you, Mark and Foamie!

Doom, my favorite way to write is economically. Thanks!

foam said...

And a well deserved congratulations to you!

Jean said...

Thank you, dear girl.

Doom said...

By the way, Jean won.

Congratulations. Seriously, your poem wow'ed me. And not just me. *BAM* Right in the kisser, sweetly and succinctly. If your poem were a women I would marry her and live in fear. :)

BlazngScarlet said...

Congrats on your Haiku win! :D

Jean said...

Thank you, Scarlet!

Doom, I have an idea for next week's contest. Hoping many will participate.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Fanbloodytastic!