Monday, November 02, 2009

Say please...

We, you and I,
along with them,
will never, possibly sometime,
cautiously once in a while
SCREAM hesitatingly while
requesting not quite boldly
but softer than a whisper...
love me, dammit.

11 comments:

Doom said...

Hey, yes. I don't know that so much from my side, but I've dated that. Wow, what a tangle it must to be a woman sometimes. But I am not complaining! No Ma'am, just... It made perfect sense when you said it that way, sort of.

Jean said...

Ha!! thanks. I think. :-)

kdzu said...

We all do...don't we.
But then we start to develop a sort of shell which keeps the whisper within...as well as the love that might be.

As usual Darlin' you knocked it out of the park.

bearly domesticated boneman said...

I'll beg. Please? Come on.
Pretty Please with sugar on't?
please please please please please?

bearly domesticated boneman said...

yes, it's a haiku
done on the spot for just you
(please) hope it'll do.

Jean said...

Thank you, Larry.
a bit of meaningful babble ;-)

Berry, it does quite well. Indeed.
d:-)

the walking man said...

Ok. I like the soft delivered dammit and because of that i love you.

Jean said...

Mark - it worked! it worked! d:-)

Doom said...

It was definitely a complement. When art gets life right, it is good. And you nailed it, me, you, and yeah.

Gia's Spot said...

Love it, dammit!

Jean said...

ah, my friend Doom...I understood.
No worries. d:-)

atta girl, Gia!