Tuesday, November 08, 2011

haiku - leaving a trace...

I can see me gone
full soul, ravenous for more
word mem'ries alive

6 comments:

  1. Jeeeaaan, why all these thoughts of death and dying and what we leave behind? Think happy thoughts... like the dolphins, roses in autumn, sunshine.

    bonnie

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  2. That's how I am, sometimes, Bonnie.
    No worries, though. I have a couple lighter ones coming up.

    :-)

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  3. I didn't see the "dark" of this.
    It looked more like a "warning" that you were ravenous to write, GIVE THE WOMAN SOME ROOM!
    and stay out of the way.

    But, lighter is cool, too.
    d=^))

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  4. I'm thinking, when I die I'll be full from this life, looking forward to the next and leaving my words to be found by others (hopefully).

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  5. I know I'm glad I found 'em when I did.

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