Thursday, December 06, 2007

Daydreaming...

sitting quiet,
someone paused
and asked, why
am I smiling so?
I answered, blushing,
it is this
man I know.
You take my
breath away,
he said to me,
I've never been
so weak.

14 comments:

  1. Without explicitly being so, this is very passionately erotic...

    And I am reminded of one of the few serious utterances by George Carlin -- something to the effect of: Life is not measured by the breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away.

    Winston
    http://nobodyasked.com

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  2. Winston - considering the scenario that might have taken his breath away... yes, there could have been eros there.
    I love George Carlin!

    Mick - somebody get the oxygen!
    heh...

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  3. Dang girl, passionate thoughts early in the morning. Now I'll be thinking of it all day. Sweet!

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  4. Larry - hope it kept you smiling :)

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  5. Lovely words that conjure up even more loving pictures.

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  6. I like how they affect each other.

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  7. Lin - human imagination is wonderful, eh?

    Berry - me too.

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  8. How can one live without such thoughts? Doesn't the opposite sex just fill and complete one? Oh, but don't let me disturb your warm fuzzies... Bah, hormones, can't live with them, can't live without them... I'm gone!

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  9. Doom - like you, if I'm awake, I'm thinking. And, thinking often stirs the hormones :)

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  10. That one was dreamy, wish it would happen to me!

    -Corby

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  11. Corby - a bittersweet memory from a while ago.

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  12. I think that I love this.........

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  13. Michelle - why thank you...and, Welcome!

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