tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post8218960458911831996..comments2024-03-22T14:30:53.568-04:00Comments on Pondering.......: You remind me of someone else...Jeanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02099808690177823190noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post-78852930411753968152010-05-01T09:30:03.726-04:002010-05-01T09:30:03.726-04:00Heya im new on here. I found this forum very helpf...Heya im new on here. I found this forum very helpful and its helped me allot. i should be able to contribute & help others like its helped me.<br /><br />I do have fun [url=http://watch-family-guy-free.warlordz.co.uk]watch online tv shows[/url] this help spin a fair amount of time.<br /><br />Cheers, See you around.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post-19072285292579637272009-11-28T12:13:30.357-05:002009-11-28T12:13:30.357-05:00What you got is pretty good, Mark.
Thank you, dea...What you got is pretty good, Mark.<br /><br />Thank you, dear.<br /><br />Mark, everyone works their way, which is very cool.<br /><br />Michael, I'm glad you're here to read mine.<br /><br />HB, I write as the words come to me.<br />There is a feel, a rhythm, that is already in the words when I hear them. I will re-read them several times to make sure they make sense to me. That is when I may move a word to another line, add a comma, change a word, cross out a word or phrase. Then I read it again.<br />The flow/rhythm can change the poem to nothing but confusion/chaos if I don't use the right word or set the phrasing correctly. <br /><br />I make no effort to follow a particular form or style (except for Sparrow's haiku contests). I guess my style is free-form, most of the time. I see a poem as (often) a conversation and there is no set form to a conversation.<br />The voice and inflection is what expresses the meaning (besides the word choice), so that the person on the other side of the conversation can understand what the writer is trying to say.<br /><br />Still, every piece is always open to each reader's interpretation.Jeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02099808690177823190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post-1010918865907646102009-11-28T10:01:58.626-05:002009-11-28T10:01:58.626-05:00Nice words Jean, I've tried to write poetry do...Nice words Jean, I've tried to write poetry dozens of times, just doesn't happen. Thanks for sharing yours.Michael Morsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07451637745981389920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post-72192353486718935752009-11-28T10:00:16.171-05:002009-11-28T10:00:16.171-05:00As you know, I am poetically challenged. A real do...As you know, I am poetically challenged. A real dork when it comes to poetry. I can rhyme. I get iambic pentameter etc. I pnce even wrote a sonnet (it sucked BTW).<br /><br />What I do not get is the "it" that makes your stuff real poetry. How do you know where to divide the words and sentences that makes the poem, well poetic? I guess that is why you are an artiste, eh?Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17269114655802698386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post-77618691733333110972009-11-28T06:52:28.770-05:002009-11-28T06:52:28.770-05:00I carry no notebook
or worry if when
I will put ...I carry no notebook <br />or worry if when <br />I will put down ink from a pen because it is only the now <br />that I makes any sense<br />now not an ill defined then.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post-58606440846464830262009-11-27T21:01:43.638-05:002009-11-27T21:01:43.638-05:00wow.
If I had read that twenty years ago,....
well...wow.<br />If I had read that twenty years ago,....<br />well. No.<br />I thought I knew it all, then.<br />But, I reckon it's the doing that's<br />more important than when.<br /><br />Nice piece, gal.bonemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14547767520204294295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21084151.post-41728280194681850272009-11-27T20:56:03.356-05:002009-11-27T20:56:03.356-05:00In all that is
Tense
In all that follows
Discovery...In all that is<br />Tense<br />In all that follows<br />Discovery<br /><br />Through experience we know<br />For with experience we learn and verify<br />And in doing so we are closer<br />We suffer the knowledge<br />That we are one with divinity<br /><br />All I got....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com