Monday, November 02, 2009

Say please...

We, you and I,
along with them,
will never, possibly sometime,
cautiously once in a while
SCREAM hesitatingly while
requesting not quite boldly
but softer than a whisper...
love me, dammit.
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11 comments:

  1. DoomNovember 02, 2009 4:53 AM

    Hey, yes. I don't know that so much from my side, but I've dated that. Wow, what a tangle it must to be a woman sometimes. But I am not complaining! No Ma'am, just... It made perfect sense when you said it that way, sort of.

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  2. JeanNovember 02, 2009 8:29 AM

    Ha!! thanks. I think. :-)

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  3. kdzuNovember 02, 2009 1:51 PM

    We all do...don't we.
    But then we start to develop a sort of shell which keeps the whisper within...as well as the love that might be.

    As usual Darlin' you knocked it out of the park.

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  4. bonemanNovember 02, 2009 6:06 PM

    I'll beg. Please? Come on.
    Pretty Please with sugar on't?
    please please please please please?

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  5. bonemanNovember 02, 2009 6:09 PM

    yes, it's a haiku
    done on the spot for just you
    (please) hope it'll do.

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  6. JeanNovember 02, 2009 7:59 PM

    Thank you, Larry.
    a bit of meaningful babble ;-)

    Berry, it does quite well. Indeed.
    d:-)

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  7. the walking manNovember 03, 2009 7:24 AM

    Ok. I like the soft delivered dammit and because of that i love you.

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  8. JeanNovember 03, 2009 9:58 PM

    Mark - it worked! it worked! d:-)

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  9. DoomNovember 04, 2009 12:51 AM

    It was definitely a complement. When art gets life right, it is good. And you nailed it, me, you, and yeah.

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  10. Gia's SpotNovember 04, 2009 4:00 AM

    Love it, dammit!

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  11. JeanNovember 04, 2009 10:15 PM

    ah, my friend Doom...I understood.
    No worries. d:-)

    atta girl, Gia!

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