Wednesday, September 16, 2009

UPDATE: Haiku in sight...

Sparrow's topic for this week's Haiku Challenge is:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ VISION ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

UPDATE: Please VOTE before 11 pm Thursday for your favorite.

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She was a vision
in his eyes. Beauty, sweetness
personified. True?

8 comments:

  1. my vision must be
    blurred a bit 'cause I can't see
    any Jean's po'try

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  2. havin' trouble getting it together.
    Distracted.

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  3. Too pooped to poeticize. I know the feeling, Jeannie!!

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  4. Speaking of pooped...I finally managed to squeeze one out just for you. heh. There I go again, being a shit ;-)

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  5. folks told me that the spiders holding my eyes was weird.

    So, in the spirit of finding things better, I trotted out a new avatar.

    oops. My nose isn't there.
    (well, at least I don't smell bad...in fact. I don't smell at all)
    No ears...WHAT? What did you say?
    I can't hear you!

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  6. Can you hear me say G(.)(.)F ?...ha!

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  7. Well, it's a sign you're having a good day so far, right?

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