Monday, June 08, 2009

Picture perfect...

looking for a
picture that matches
the one in my mind
of you and me
on the beach in the rain
slow dancing to our own
music. the rhythm only
you and I have together.

sipping raindrops from your lips.
you wrapping my hair
around your fingertips.

barefoot in the foam
at the edge of low tide
toes sinking in the soft sand
moonlight sparkling off the
ocean. and us.

And us. sparkling and
swaying and tasting the
rain. on each other.

Perfect picture complete.
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15 comments:

  1. the walking manJune 08, 2009 5:41 AM

    If I had an unbroken romantic bone left in my body I would like this.


    Good rhythm wonderful flow from image to image and a fine end line.

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  2. AnonymousJune 08, 2009 8:23 AM

    OMG. . . . HOT. . . . I want to paint this picture with you. . .

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  3. JeanJune 08, 2009 2:44 PM

    Mark...praise from a master.
    Thank you, sir.

    Anon...you could be the brush ;-)

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  4. Joan of Argghh!June 08, 2009 8:57 PM

    More, please!

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  5. Living Dees LifeJune 09, 2009 12:30 AM

    makes me think of me and my man

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  6. JeanJune 09, 2009 11:08 AM

    Joanie, let me check my stash ;-)

    Blaez, that is a very good thing!

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  7. DianeJune 09, 2009 1:08 PM

    Beautiful!

    Don't you wish you COULD have pictures of certain moments? Well, the ones where you're wearing clothes, of course! ;)

    Or not... ;)

    XO

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  8. SparrowJune 09, 2009 5:26 PM

    Oh my.

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  9. kdzuJune 09, 2009 5:47 PM

    Somebody so needs to get laid.

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  10. bonemanJune 09, 2009 6:48 PM

    dancing, but, not into the water.


    sharks.

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  11. JeanJune 09, 2009 8:01 PM

    Diane, the 'or not' sounds good to me ;-)

    Sparrow? Yo, Sparrow. You ok? heh.

    Bwahahaha! Larry. Dammit, I am so obvious.

    Berry, no, only on the shallow edge where it's safe. and fun.

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  12. AnonymousJune 09, 2009 9:09 PM

    I'd hit it, given the chance.

    BDP

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  13. JeanJune 09, 2009 9:23 PM

    Would you now, BDP? You could probably handle it, too.

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  14. Dan FelsteadJune 14, 2009 12:36 PM

    Jean,
    Great descriptive verse! I am a photographer and I am searching my mind now for a photo that matches but none can match your words.

    Dan

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  15. JeanJune 14, 2009 1:17 PM

    Dan, I much admire your photography and take your comment as a wonderful compliment. Thank you :-)

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