Monday, June 02, 2008

dit moi pourquoi...

a memory never was
but wished for.
dreams will never see
light of day.
tomorrow will be emptier
without one.
eventually,
everything goes away.
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12 comments:

  1. JeanJune 02, 2008 10:40 PM

    'tell me why'...

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  2. AspergantuSJune 02, 2008 11:05 PM

    very nice piece Jean, very nice. Has a great flow.

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  3. JeanJune 02, 2008 11:08 PM

    thanks, dear. We need to make some music!

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  4. DoomJune 03, 2008 1:00 AM

    That is almost depressing, but it isn't. It is so airy, with enough truth and simplicity too, that is is silken. Thanks.

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  5. AnonymousJune 03, 2008 8:02 AM

    I was groping for the right words. Then I saw doom's comment. Right...

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  6. JeanJune 03, 2008 8:05 AM

    Such gracious gentlemen, my readers.

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  7. DeadmanJune 03, 2008 9:41 AM

    dit moi pourquoi...

    Parceque, malheureusement, ca c'est la vie de temps en temps. Mais il fait plus doux les experiences entretemps.

    ;o)>

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  8. FaithJune 03, 2008 10:13 AM

    Doom said it best. where I am it speaks to my heart. Bless you Jean.

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  9. Joan of Argghh!June 03, 2008 8:43 PM

    what doom said...

    damn, woman! awesome.

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  10. JeanJune 03, 2008 9:01 PM

    Mark...I'm going back to my Fr/Eng dictionary. It's been a long time :-)

    Bless you, Faith.

    Joan...thanks, gal.

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  11. curmudgeonJune 04, 2008 3:18 PM

    Over the hill? What hill? I don't remember any hill...

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  12. AnonymousJune 04, 2008 10:56 PM

    Very literal translation:

    Says me why...

    Because, unfortunately, ca this is time life in time. But it does more soft the experiences between time.

    I don't see (feel) the happy in this one either... Welcome back!

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