Sunday, May 04, 2008

stalker...

when
no one's looking,
dreams are
haunting
the back of my brain like
shadows
that have no
edge.
I see
shadows.
Do they see
me?
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17 comments:

  1. EricaMay 04, 2008 10:56 PM

    I see
    dead people.
    Do they see
    me?


    :-)

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  2. JeanMay 05, 2008 8:12 AM

    Yikes, Eri... is that 'Sixth Sense'?

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  3. dianneMay 05, 2008 9:04 AM

    Jean are you having those kind of bad dreams that leave a feeling of unease with you throughout the day and make you feel anxious? I really hate those.

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  4. JeanMay 05, 2008 9:56 AM

    No, not really, Dianne. I rarely remember dreams.

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  5. kdzuMay 05, 2008 7:52 PM

    Good Question.
    Are they your shadows.........
    ......or mine?

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  6. JeanMay 05, 2008 7:56 PM

    Larry...hehehe.

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  7. CorbyMay 05, 2008 8:40 PM

    good one!

    -Corby

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  8. DeadmanMay 05, 2008 11:45 PM

    I see a handgun in your future...

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  9. DoomMay 06, 2008 1:24 PM

    Ah, fears. Shadows of my mind anyway. Guns won't help free one of most of those, it is merely and purely fear itself. Things that were, things that are, and things that are to come. Claustrophobia is my newest lady of darkness, my fear in lace, love, and death.

    Ok, enough oddity. Is it of fear with which you speak (write)?

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  10. JeanMay 06, 2008 7:08 PM

    thank you, Corby.

    Mark - well, actually not. When I went to the range the one and only time, it made me realize that having a gun was not a good choice for me.

    Doom, indeed.

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  11. DeadmanMay 06, 2008 9:55 PM

    Can I interest you in a nice bazooka, then?

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  12. JeanMay 06, 2008 9:57 PM

    BWAHAHAHAHA!!

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  13. AnonymousMay 06, 2008 11:12 PM

    Shadows.
    Something in the dark unseen.

    I can almost taste it.

    Fear is becoming my friend.
    We stay close.

    I think I see it.

    Senses on high, I wait for dawn.
    I wait with my fear.

    Gone with the light.

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  14. AnonymousMay 07, 2008 6:29 PM

    really, jean...

    only the shadow knows
    for sure

    and your hairdresser, too

    /t.

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  15. bonemanMay 07, 2008 8:37 PM

    first off, of course they see you. They reach out and grab your feet as you walk along. If every action has an opposite and equal reaction....what is the reaction of a shadow?

    OK, that's silly. It never has a reaction because it has no voice.
    On the other hand, Bird has a post MADE for aspiring young writers like you.

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  16. AnonymousMay 07, 2008 9:09 PM

    I love it when you get all noir. *grin*

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  17. JeanMay 08, 2008 6:23 PM

    Anon, that's excellent! (Is that you, Cactus Mark?)

    /t, I can guarantee my hairdresser isn't telling :-)

    Berry, I went, I read, I was very impressed! Thanks.

    Irrel... aw, shucks. hehe.

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