Wednesday, January 16, 2008

Hard Haiku...

The Weekly Wednesday Haiku Contest

Sparrow's topic this week is WORK.

Go on, give the poor woman something to
read while she's in the islands.


my entry:

We do it backwards,
you know. Play and learn while young.
Save work for old age.
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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2008 12:30 PM

    Oooh. Oooh! I've got one.

    I don’t belong here
    It’s the simple life for me
    Can I convince him?

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2008 1:56 PM

    Oh, Jean, with every passing day I realize the inevitable truth in your words..

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  3. JeanJanuary 16, 2008 5:33 PM

    Freddie, it's great! Go submit it.

    Winston, working for yourself is much harder, I imagine.

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  4. I. VadinoffJanuary 16, 2008 7:01 PM

    I did Haiku...
    but you still have High Kooties...

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2008 9:07 PM

    *sigh* If only it were that way.

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  6. DeadmanJanuary 16, 2008 9:16 PM

    "We do it backwards"

    OMG. The visuals...

    ;o)>

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  7. JeanJanuary 17, 2008 12:56 AM

    I. Vad - booger. : )

    Irrel - if only...

    Mark - Bwahahahahaaaa!

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  8. CarteachJanuary 17, 2008 6:12 PM

    Well, I liked mine, but voted for yours...

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  9. JeanJanuary 17, 2008 7:30 PM

    Carteach0 - that was very sweet. I see we're tied for second place.

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  10. CarteachJanuary 17, 2008 7:34 PM

    Well, I am learning to write Haiku, so I count myself winner already.

    You..... are very, very good at this.

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  11. JeanJanuary 17, 2008 7:39 PM

    why, thank you, sir.
    Having been a teacher, myself, I thought yours was beautiful.
    You're learning quickly.

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  12. CarteachJanuary 17, 2008 7:40 PM

    Thank you!

    I remain,
    Your student....

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  13. JeanJanuary 17, 2008 7:48 PM

    hehehe... such a charmer :)

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